On Sunday, the body of a 17-year-old girl was found on one of Queen Elizabeth II's estates. A dog walker found the body three miles from the royal residence at Sandrigham House. Part of the 31-square-mile estate is open to the public and officials say that the crime is in no way related to the Royal family. The body was identified as Alisa Dmitrijeva, who has been missing since August. Hopefully, justice is brought for the victims family.
The author of this article did not use many strategies, and if he had I believe that this would have been a better article. I did not like how the writer did not include the name of the missing girl until the second paragraph. Readers want to know who, what, where, when, and why right off the bat. No one wants to wait until the second or third paragraph to read what happened. I think that the writer was very all over the place and should've thought more about his order.
I completely agree that audiences want to know the important information right off the bat! Don't delay, just tell us. Nice post!
ReplyDeleteThats disgusting. I read the article and I agree, the author could have made it a little more interesting.. Nice post!
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